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Jordan Lore - DENIED

Post by Learsicerebal on Sun Feb 28, 2016 8:31 am

Full name: Jordan Lorien Lore
Alias(s): Lorien Sorcerer
Nickname (if applicable):
Codename (if applicable):
Affiliation (check Universe info): Student at School
Moral alignment: Find someone
Race: White
Nationality: Geneoshian
Home City/Town: Geneosha Isle
Current Age: 19
Date/Time of Birth: UNKNOWN
Date/Time of Death (if applicable):
Zodiac:
Religion (if applicable):
Sicknesses/Diseases (if applicable):
Medical History (optional):

Source of Power (Mystic, Mutate, Mutant, or alien):  Mutant
Power: Empathy/Empathic Negation/healing
Telekinesis
Soul-self
Teleportation
Flight
Magikinesis* [Created this]
Sub-Abilities (if applicable): Hex Magic
Description of Power(s):
[when using his powers his eyes actually gives off a white glow glow]
*Jordan can Read, control, and heal people emotions through telepathic abilities.
* When using his telekinesis, the object turns black with a white outlining
*When using his soul-self, his body can turn into a black demonic bird shape, kinda looking like astral projection.
*Jordan can teleport himself anywhere by going through portals of Ebony darkness
*Jordan can fly
*Jordan can control and summon spells through the power of the mind. Growing up, he was given a power by wiccan and understood it completely. When using this power, 1 purple ring circles the perimeter of his hand

Weaknesses of Power(s): Jordan runs out of mental power and it is very effective
Skills Outside of Abilities (if applicable): Master manipulator
Other (weapon or magic product): Book of spells

Known Family:
Famous Relations (if applicable): Scarlet Witch[half-sister],Wiccan[half-nephew], Quicksilver[half-brother],Lorna[half-sister],
Registered with S.H.I.E.L.D?: No

Face Claim (a celebrity or model would work fine): Jake T. Austin
Height: 5'4
Weight:185
Body Type:ottermode
Hair Color: brown
Hair Length/Style: shaggy
Facial hair(y/n) Length/Style:
Eye Color: black [purple edges]
Glasses/Contacts(y/n) style:
Skin (wrinkled, smooth, freckled, etc.): Smooth
Ethnicity:
Tattoos(y/n): No
Distinguishing Features:
Distinguishing Marks (scars, birthmarks, ect.): NONE
Dress Style (punk, nerdy, goth, mix, ect.): Nerdy
Gender: Male
Accessories: Owns a necklace that holds 8 different gems
Uniform (if applicable): Headband, A white sleeveless body-long shirt-pants, white boots, a black cloak

History (past & leading up to rp): Jordan is a mutant that spawned out of no where. He was born on the Isle named Geneosha, and grew up there. He made a friend of the princess of Geneosha, Leia. He grew up in his home, and left at the age of 17, not finishing school. He made it to america, and began a life there. He would toy with people emotions, and play around with his telekinesis. He teleported everywhere and mat a lot of people. Then, he met a man named Billy. They became great friends, and worked together numerous times, before billy had to go away. One day, when Jordan was working at target, his sight began to change colorless, and something called to him. Whatever it was, it was annoying, but he knew it was needed to be seen. Whatever it was. He left his area, and began to follow that was calling him. It brings him to the school.
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Re: Jordan Lore - DENIED

Post by ネオンスピリット on Sun Feb 28, 2016 9:19 pm

Your character sheet has been DENIED for the following reasons:
- Overpowered/Excessive abilities
- Inane answers given
- Incomplete sheet
- Outdated sheet


A character of this caliber could, potentially, never pass. Please post an edit fixing these issues if you'd like it to be reevaluated however. For specific details, contact an administrator on Skype.
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